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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Key (02/14/13)

TITLE: The Unheard Conversation
By Patrick Champion
02/20/13


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We three are the key to everything for them in every way, but we must let them have free will. But Father, they are going to use, disobey, disregard, turn their backs, lie to us, deny us, and ultimately betray us. That doesnít matter we must turn the other cheek and love them to us anyway, because through you is the only way for them to come to me and we three know this. My son, I will first pass the key to you and you will have to go to them and grow up among them as one of them. When you get to the age that we have discussed, you will have to die on a cross for their sins and rise on the third day and fulfill the rest of your duration until it is time to come back to me. After which, you will pass the key to the Holy Spirit who will follow through by giving everybody that will accept this free gift to them. To which they can use this Key (YOU) to open this gift and have Everlasting Life! Son, I know that you will catch all the pain, torment, anguish, spitting, taunting and basically BRUNT of it all; but YOU are their answer to ANY question they have. We know what we must do so let us get busy because they are already messing everything up and they arenít even born yet!! Father, Iím already hurting from the things that will be done to me. I know son, but just think of all of the lives that you will CHANGE in the years to come. Thank you both for all of the hard work and preparations you are about to do for OUR plan to come together.


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Bonnie Bowden02/21/13
Great message. If you leave a double space between paragraphs, this would be easier to read.
CD Swanson 02/23/13
Beautiful and prolific messages in this enjoyable read. Thanks.

God bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 02/24/13
I really loved this creative piece. I think it's a great way to explain The Trinity to kids or new believers.

I would suggest that you use quotation marks and possibly add some action to show who is speaking. Ex: Jesus wiped a tear from his eye. "It hurts my heart when they disobey." Also make sure you start a new paragraph each time someone different speaks, even if it's just one word. If you double space between the paragraph it will give the reader more white space.

Your story is definitely a fresh and unique take on the topic. I think you did a nice job of drawing the reader in and keeping my attention right to the very end.
Virgil Youngblood 02/25/13
The title caught my attention and your article delivered the explanation. I agree with the above comments. Nice devotional thoughts.