The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/13
This was so short in words, yet so powerful in its meaning! You did a wonderful job of bringing the simplicity of how we can 'grow closer' to God. WOnderful job here.

God bless~
I like what you said and believe the truth in your words. I wish you had gone a step or two beyond though. For example, share a time when you realized you needed God to help you through. Things like that will pull the reader in and allow her to relate more. You did a nice job of writing on topic and I have no doubt that God will bless others with this message.