The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/13
Lovely sentiments in this timely devotional. Nicely done. God bless~
02/23/13
Great reminder of many ways God unlocks us and our hearts. Enjoyed this very much.
I think this is a fabulous devotion. You made some great points in this piece. My suggestion might be to expand a bit more on your examples. I wanted to know more about the kid in the street and the lady sent there to watch over them. If you can just focus on one thing or work on smoothing out your transitions, then I think you will turn good writing into great writing in no time at all. You did a nice job on this and I enjoyed reading it. It made me stop and think about where Jesus is sending me today, and if I'm willing to go there. Making a person stop and think is always a good thing for an author to do. Good job.