The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/13
A timely reminder and a great message in this entry. Nicely done.

God bless~
This is a lovely mini sermon with so many wonderful illustrations to make the reader stop and think. You had a few punctuation errors. You may want to find a good proofreader or get a book like Strunk's element of Style. I find it quite helpful.
I always enjoy an article that makes me stop and think. Your piece did just that. Thank you for sharing it.
02/25/13
I loved this cross between an essay and a poem. It had great imagery and I loved the end. I did see one misspelled word.