The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/13
Loved the devotional and loved the last line. Nicely done. Thank you. God bless~
I think you did a nice job of presenting your views on this piece. You did a great job of backing up your reasoning with scripture. Make sure you cite which translation you are quoting and if quoting songs or other works, make sure you aren't using copyright protected material. You can use a small amount, I think it's like ten percent. I think you covered the topic in a nice way and you gave the reader some great points to think about. Good job.
02/25/13
This was a good essay on freedom. You used good scriptures to make your points. I did notice that you seemed to change tenses a bit. It's a little confusing when you moved from what scriptures says and what people did. But your message was solid.
Congratulations on placing third in your level and for ranking 31 overall! (The highest rankings can be found on the message boards for the top 8 to 15 in each level and the top 35 overall.)
02/28/13
Congrats. God bless~