The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/13
This piece really spoke to me about what a note should contain.

I might not have began with "a noteworthy note needs to be noted" because the message seems duplicated.

I really enjoyed your poem overall. Keep writing.
This is quite lovely. You really have a way with arranging your words. At times I felt like I was reading what Dr Seuss might have written on this topic. You did a fine job.
As I read over my comment I realized it could me taken in many ways. I meant it with the utmost respect. His rhythm was divine and I believe he was nothing short of genius so my comment meant your work was also brilliant. :-)
Congratulations for placing 14th in your level!