The Official Writing Challenge
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02/17/13
Thank you as parents for taking on the challenge of adopting children as well as raising your own.

You point out very thoughtfully the struggle that can come of a blended family getting along.

02/17/13
I would like to understand more about Reactive Attachment Disorder and how it affected the family. You briefly describe it to us but I have never heard about it before.

Is that why your daughter or son hurls such painful comments at you.
I enjoyed this creative take on the topic. I found it interesting. The only thing I'd suggest changing is I wanted to meet the characters more. You talked about the kids in the other room but I wanted them in the room so that I could really get to know them more. You did a nice job of wrapping up the ending and bringing the circle full circle. Nice job.
Congratulations for placing 11th in your level!