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TITLE: Perfect Note | Previous Challenge Entry
By Patrick Champion
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A piece like this can easily feel like a lecture to some people. A good way to fix this would be to change the voice from talking directly to the reader about what they should do would be to show how something impacted your life and share that.
I think this is a great analogy. I like the idea of each person being a note. Alone that note may sound a bit harsh but by blending them together it is like harmonizing with God. Lovely bit of writing,