The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/13
This is a touching story. It reminded me of how I saw an image of Christ in a Olympic when I was in Junior high (well before I was saved, after college). Before she dove, I new she would win Gold, I saw Christ in her, and just knew she would win. (not sure how to describe it.) I'm sure you will touch many people with this story. Thank you!
02/16/13
Very inspiring story. Thank you to all the brave men and women that so diligently keep us safe.
Wow what a powerful story. You did a fantastic job of laying out the conflict right away. Your descriptions were smack on, almost to the point where I could smell the smells. God can do so much with something that may seem little. I think as humans we may hope our purpose in life is something grand, but when done for the glory of God something as inconsequential as writing a letter can be huge! I loved this from beginning to end!
02/18/13
I loved this entire piece! Excellent job with this.

God bless~
02/18/13
very descriptive reading, enjoyed it.
Congratulations for placing 8th in level one!