The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a touching story. It reminded me of how I saw an image of Christ in a Olympic when I was in Junior high (well before I was saved, after college). Before she dove, I new she would win Gold, I saw Christ in her, and just knew she would win. (not sure how to describe it.) I'm sure you will touch many people with this story. Thank you!
Very inspiring story. Thank you to all the brave men and women that so diligently keep us safe.
Wow what a powerful story. You did a fantastic job of laying out the conflict right away. Your descriptions were smack on, almost to the point where I could smell the smells. God can do so much with something that may seem little. I think as humans we may hope our purpose in life is something grand, but when done for the glory of God something as inconsequential as writing a letter can be huge! I loved this from beginning to end!
I loved this entire piece! Excellent job with this.

God bless~
very descriptive reading, enjoyed it.
Congratulations for placing 8th in level one!