The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed the points you made in this essay. Your scripture choices we're a perfect match for your message.

The only thing I might suggest would be to work on varying the sentence structures. I think you'd be surprised how many times you use the word I, my or he to start a sentence. You can mix it up like this: Many obvious fault can be seen as a blessing.

Overall you did a fantastic job in witnessing to others so that we may grow in Christ as well. Great job.
02/02/13
Amen! God bless~