The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/13
This is a fun poem. I like the format you chose to write it in--very creative.
01/26/13
Clever use of topic. Great fun stuff! God bless~
I really enjoyed this piece. The repetition really packed home the message and a need to rest. Good job.
I don't know much about poetry but I think this is an interesting style. Your fourth "Get" is misspelled. That has happened to all of us, and challenges us to proof read carefully to ensure putting out our best work. Good job.
01/31/13
Congrats. God bless~
Congratulations for placing 2nd in level one and for ranking 16 overall! That's super impressive for your first challenge! (The top 13 in level one and the top 40 overall can be found on the message boards under Writing Challenge, Results and Highest rankings)