The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/13
Very sweet story and very nicely written. It is tough when you are in a rut with your thoughts. Im glad God used you to bring Richard some peace and helping him to change his gloomy thoughts. Praise God!
01/26/13
Amen and Amen! Loved this.

God bless~
This is an interesting story. You intrigued me with this moving banter between the characters. There are some errors, missing quotation marks, and using your instead of you're. A good proofreader will help you with all of that. You did a nice job of writing on topic while still educating the reader about this devastating disorder. Good job.