The Official Writing Challenge
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01/26/13
This is masterfully written, beautiful, and extremely poignant. Perfect for the topic, and soothing to my soul. THANK you!
Wow what a powerful story. You did an excellent job of developing the conflict right away. It drew me in and made me want to keep reading right to the very end. I will admit that I did not think that fear was the MC's companion. It doesn't happen very often that I get surprised by the ending so it is a real treat when I do. This was a delightful read.
Ahhh, the ending surprised me, and I think that was due in part to the title. I would not think of fear as a friend. The conclusion tied in in well to the challenge theme. Good job.
01/28/13
Wow, you kept me guessing until the end about who the "friend" was! Nice work!
Congratulations for ranking 8th in level one! (The top 40 overall and the top 13 in level one can be found on the message boards under the Heading the Writing Challenge)
I just want to thank all of you for your kind comments. This was my 1st attempt at writing and your encouragement is such a blessing to me!
Donna