The Official Writing Challenge
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I read your story and I thought, darn it, this is good!! I laughed all through this piece, I loved it! You are a good writer.
Wow! You did an awesome job with this one. I really delighted in your sardonic humor. Your message came through loud and clear and wasn't the least bit preachy. It was a delightful read.
01/21/13
Yes, you sure are a good writer - you'll be rising through ranks, that's for sure too!

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Colin (Gold Membership)
01/22/13
Nicely done! I so enjoyed this. God bless~
Ah...the things we do to make ourselves 'measure up' - or so we think!
Very real to life. Well done.
01/24/13
This was a fun story, Emily. I am more like the MC than her friend. Congratulations on your 2nd place entry.
Congratulations on your ribbon in your level and for ranking 13 overall!!(very impressive. The top 40 overall rankings can be found on the message boards)
01/25/13
God Bless...Congrats