The Official Writing Challenge
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What a beautiful poem. I can relate to the MC so well. I lost my brother in a car accident when he was 17.
There is such a sense of pain in these words that it is almost palpable.My mom has been gone for 19 years and I still miss her like crazy. You packed a lot of emotion in this poem.
I hesitate to say anything. It's like treading in a secret garden. I just want to sit in the quiet of the thoughts and pictures and drink in the sacred. Thank you.
The anguish and pain is clearly defined in every word...this was touching and beautiful.

God bless~