The Official Writing Challenge
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This is great. You had me snorting throughout the piece as my mind pictured the happenings that you showed. Although it's not 100% clear, I'm guessing the mis-stepping MC is Santa Claus or perhaps the Grinch. Whichever way the reader chooses it to be this was a light-hearted and fun story.
I loved this piece. I could actually feel the fall and stepping on the toy. It was short and sweet and it made me laugh!
12/12/12
Hahahahahahahaha....This was so funny and lively. Nicely done. I enjoyed it.
God bless~