The Official Writing Challenge
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08/10/12
I loved the ending! Hahahaha...So good. Wonderful story telling. I thought this clever, on topic and entertaining.

Thanks. God bless~
I liked this story as I recalled a time I had to drive home from being with family and there was a blizzard.

This was a cute story and on topic.

Be sure to close a quote after opening one. Otherwise, this was a great entry.

08/11/12
Oh Ho! This is terrific..and I loved the ending also...and I now have a craving for fried chicken. You are a natural born story teller! Great piece and great job!

God BLess, Lynn
08/12/12
What a fun read! I was biting my fingernails over the poor girls out in that weather, having driven a lot of wintery roads in my day, but your surprise had me pumping my fist and saying "Yes!" Then, I wanted a bite of that chicken. Thanks for this delightful article.
08/12/12
I really enjoyed this cute "sister story"! :) Your writing was nicely descriptive, and I liked the ending! Good job!
You do an excellent job when telling stories of keeping the narrative moving along. The narration is "real."
so believeable! nice job.
08/13/12
Terrific inner-profiling of your MC and her totally relaxed (with good reason) sister. Loved the twist at the end, because the whole episode was so believable. Great work.
This is a delightful read. I could feel the tension and know how hard it is to drive in the snow. You did a nice job of building the conflict. Be careful your title doesn't give away the ending. Because of it, I figured out very soon that the sister sneaked some chicken into the bag. The characters felt real and I was chuckling in the end. This is a fresh take of the topic and a piece I truly enjoyed.
08/16/12
cONGRATS! AS USUAL, YOU AND I ARE RIGHT THERE TOGETHER! THIS WAS AN EXCELLENT STORY AND I REALLY COULD TASTE THAT FRIED CHICKEN!

wONDERFUL!
08/16/12
Congratulations! God Bless~
Congratulations! Happy Dance!