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05/31/12
This touched my heart. The questions looming large about the "food shelters" run by Christians and not "sitting" with others, or sharing the "word." Very powerful. Also, you did a great job with imagery. Very descpritive indeed. I loved the ending...and Praise the Lord you have a beautiful family. Thanks for sharing. God Bless~
I think this is my favorite sentenced! "The house I stayed in was but a shadow of a former glory; it lined itself in humiliation next to all the other run down caskets."

I enjoyed this very much!
Wow! I have tears in my eyes. I knew I was in for a great read when I found myself resting my chin on my hands and leaning in closer to the screen. Subconsciously, I was getting as close as possible so as to not miss a single detail. I live in a rural area of NY state where a big town 's population might be 5,000 and the dominate skin color is 98% white. You opened me up to a whole new world and I felt like I was right there with you.