The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Oh my goodness what a gripping story. It had me biting my fingernails. Tornadoes get me so nervous!
I am so thrilled the MC survived...and how wonderful their hearts were filled with compassion to help others with their wealth.

The Lord is happy about that!
Thank you for this.

God Bless~
You did a spectacular job building suspense. Having the MC pregnant made the conflict in the story even greater. I enjoyed the characters. You were definitely on topic.
05/05/12
What a fun, thrilling story. Loved the happy ending.
05/05/12
What a wonderful story! It was full of suspense and had a happy ending. I like the characters. It was heartwarming to see how eager they were to use their new found wealth to help others.
05/06/12
LOVE THIS TITLE!!! Sweet story even though there was a tornado in there. I hate sleeping with socks on but so glad this soon-to-be-mom did:) Good job!
Congratulations for ranking 10th in level one!