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Very good work! I felt your MC's pain and loss, and it touched my heart deeply.

You have wonderfully captured the comfort of a godly mother in relationship with her child.
One little red mark? Did you mean six inches of soil or six feet of soil? The six inches made me think of a pet not a person.
It is a great piece, well done.
This was a very nice read!
You touched me and made me cry. Beautiful. Simply put...Beautiful.

God Bless~
This was a beautiful poem. It gave me shivers. God is unchanging and always there for us helpless humans. Thank you for sharing it!
What a beautiful snapshot of a mother's love. Nice work.
This is beautiful and really touched my heart. It's been 18 years since I lost my mom but I know she lives on, not only in my words but also through my own little ones.
Nicely done. I enjoyed this very much,and like your narrative style to this poem.
Congratulations for ranking 11th in level one!