The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/11
There are many temptations thrust in a Christian's life everyday. You clearly illustrated that in this entry.

Good job - God Bless~
This is interesting and thought-provoking.

Though the topic category might be a slight stretch. I could see the parallels towards unchristian behavior and Spam It might have shown your point more if you gave an example of a time when Spam was unappealing.

I think your story would have had a greater impact if you had started with the paragraph about your friend and the waitress.

The ending was a nice summation of your message. It left me with some good things to think about.
11/28/11
Wow, what a marvelous mind you have. Slow the stream of your words, to allow the reader to more fully reflect on the quality of your message. Your rosebud is edit.