The Official Writing Challenge
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03/10/11
So true, So very true.
03/11/11
wooo yes a great story, starts out so ordinary and then wow! clever and i am glad you didnt end with "it all being a dream" more powerful as it stands. you did not need to say it was fiction but true. it stands alone.
03/12/11
Great job of expressing the way the most of us will feel, I am afraid. I'm sure we never really grasp every opportunity.