The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/10
It's awesome that this is a true story. try reading your story out loud for places where words may be missing or sentences be unclear. Any place where you need to pause and re-read to get the sentence out smoothly should probably be re-written. Great pick for this topic.
12/03/10
i love the title very clever! a good story too!
12/05/10
A very exciting account. You handled the situation so well. God bless you.
This was a scary story. You did a good job showing that danger was near. I'm glad it had a good ending.
Very interesting and exciting story. I was a little apprehensive that the police would think you were the culprit and arrest you.
12/08/10
Your concern for the man was obvious. The tension was apparent. Thanks for sharing.