The Official Writing Challenge
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To be in communion with the Lord! So tenderly written with smooth rhyme and rhythm. Good reminder for us to realize we may be the only Jesus others see. Blessings. :)
This is beautiful and evoked a great deal of emotion in me.
10/25/10
I agree with Jeanne - your rhyme and rhythm were excellent. I like how the story unfolded for Thomas to a glorious conclusion. Great message.
10/26/10
I identify with Thomas more than any of the other disciples. I would have been the "show me," kid.
What a wonderful day it will be when all of us "Thomas's" are reunited with our Father! Look up! He's coming!