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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Conversation (face to face) (10/07/10)

TITLE: Father to Daughter
By Christine Ramey
10/11/10


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Do you hear me?
Canít you feel My presence?
Donít you know who I am?

Donít you know I love you?
Can you see the paths Iíve chosen for you?
Havenít you heard I gave my son for you?

Iím your Father and I love you.
I see your life is going downhill.
Save yourself and give your life a chance.

I will never forsake you.
I will never leave you.
My love for you will always be here.

Life is worth living, never give up!
Do what I meant for you to do.
I will give you the desire to complete them.

Itís your choice,
How you will live your life.
Life will always be filled with trials.
You will always face circumstances.

Trials will come and go.
Itís Me you need to trust.
Iím your Father!

I will always love you.
Donít ever forget this!
Hold my hand and follow me.

Youíre my daughter,
And Iím your Father.
My love will sustain you.
Iíll comfort you in your pain.

In My arms Iíll keep you safe.
With My words,
Youíll be comforted.
My shoulder will hold your tears.

My ears, will listen to your every need.
My heart will bring you love.
My son will give you life.

Iím your Father,
And youíre my daughter.
Never forget that I love you.


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 10/21/10
This is beautiful. I sense that you've had some pain on your life and this is a beautiful conversation between the Lord and His child.
Jan Ackerson 10/23/10
Just the sort of comfort that I've also found in my own dark days!

This might be slightly off-topic, as conversations with God (until we're with Him in heaven) aren't really face-to-face.

I love the "Father" aspect of God, and your poem captures that so well.
Yvonne Blake 10/24/10
Beautiful comforting thoughts!
Lollie Hofer 10/26/10
Thanks for the encouraging thoughts. They reminds me my Father's love is unconditional.
Lollie Hofer 10/26/10
"They reminds me?" I meant "they remind me..." (And that is why I'm not in Masters yet. I ain't got no good English.)