The Official Writing Challenge
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08/14/10
This was a beautiful expression of the Christian life. I especially like your use of repetition. We are indeed blessed.
This is beautiful and you selected the ideal verse to accompany your words.
You have a lovely way of phrasing your words. For me, I wonder if less use of repitition would have worked better. I found myself skipping over some lines because of the repition, but I made myself stop because each sentence was a beautiful beatitude.
Very lovely. Well done.
08/17/10
Then I am blessed because your poem really touched me. Very good. Look forward to more from you. God bless.
You blessed me too! What a great example of having a heart for God! I too, think it would perhaps be even stronger without as much repetition but regardless, a great poem.