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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: The Reader (04/15/10)

TITLE: Agent Spider Jane
By Theresa Santy
04/20/10


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Dear Website,

Good afternoon. My name is Agent Spider, but you can call me Jane.

Pardon my intrusion, but you are my next seed; which is to say, your address is my next mission. Iím a web scanner, designed to harvest data. Donít be alarmedóIím a professional. Iíll only be updating code, checking links, and gathering up-to-date information. The web is large, and fast, and dynamic, so Iím required to be brutally energetic, yet quiet and agile. You wonít even know Iím here.

Feel free to continue about your business, while I crawl about and read an inconceivable quantity of encryption.

When I was a newbie spider bot, I made plenty of mistakes. Once, I grabbed too much information, and I crashed a server. On the same day, I accidentally fell into a trap. I sat there for weeks before an administrator found and released me. Iíve since learned to prioritize downloads, and to steer away from danger. Iím always finding new ways to search for resources, and to improve, and impress.

You may find comfort in knowing Iím not a spam bot. Oh how I detest those malicious web pirates, which care too much about mass accumulation, and too little of quality.

So go on; keep allowing clicks and entries. Donít mind me, as I climb in, take notes, and build a frontier. I wonít be long; donít need to do too much more, as I finish collecting some personal information.

Thatís it. Iíll be going now. Itís time for me to report my findings and begin my next mission. With any luck, Iíll be promoted, and then assigned to search the invisible web, a universe we bots call The Deep.

You have been very kind to let me spy. Your hospitality is greatly appreciated.

Sincerely,

Agent Spider Jane


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angelos2 wark04/22/10
A fresh take on the topic.

I like this!
Maria Egilsson 04/22/10
very interesting. I enjoyed it.
Joanne Sher 04/27/10
Definitely a creative piece, and a very different take on the topic. Enjoyed this!
Cindy Carver04/29/10
Congrats on your win. Very cute. I enjoyed it, though left me wondering about my security!
...and thank you on your comments on my story. I appreciate the input.
Cindy
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 04/29/10
Congratulations for placing so well in your level. Good job!
Eliza Evans 05/01/10
What gorgeous creativity!! Loved it. Such a fun and satisfying read.