The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/10
Awww, this made me miss my little daughters (now grown women).

Be careful of "it's"--with the apostrophe, it means "it is" (you wanted the possessive "its").

Lovely story, very pleasant to read.
..dark cliffs ...surround us like welcoming arms. That creates such a beautiful picture in my mind. I love your descriptions, and the calming mood of this piece. Nicely done.
You use such vivid descriptions. I could close my eyes and picture the beauty.