The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/10
What a lift to the heart. There is always hope in God. We all need to hear these good stories to balance out all of the bad news we are all bombarded with! Good job
02/19/10
Great story. I was a little confused about the timeline of the events in Jordan's life. I liked how hearing the sirens brought the story teller back to past events.
Great story...gave me goose bumps! If you double space between paragraphs, would be a little easier on the eyes :)