The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/10
Great piece! We have all experienced days like that! We growl. Surely, God grins!
02/05/10
I love the story that you tell through this poem! It flows beautifully and humorously, all the while preparing you for the wonderful lesson at the end. Masterful job!
02/07/10
"Keenly aware 'me world' must crumble" What a great line.
Loved the whole piece! Well done.
02/10/10
I like the way you shift the poem from what's going on to looking beyond, and especially the response from our Lord. Touches the heart!
02/11/10
Hey Kelli, congrats on placing 6th in Level 1 with your entry! You are among some great writers, so good job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings posted on the forums:

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