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Great descriptions! It has a Little house on the Prairie feeling that was really enjoyable.
02/07/10
Kids are the same in every era. I could see this in a novel. I wish you would have shared the scripture in written form. People sometimes won't make time to look it up. Keep writing, well done.
I felt like I was taken to a Little House on the Prairie scene, that's a great compliment because Laura Ingalls Wilder is one of my favorite authors. You did a good job describing everything, I just wished you'd quoted the scripture instead of referencing it. Well done
02/11/10
Hey Amanda, congrats on placing 7th in Level 1 with your entry! You are among some great writers, so good job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings posted on the forums:

http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=28720
02/12/10
I really enjoyed this story. I thought you developed the scene and the characters very well. I found myself wishing that there was more to read. I thought the very end was the part that really held the message and it just kind of stopped abruptly. I really enjoyed it and I am looking forward to reading more of your entries. Thanks for the comments on mine. Your feedback was much appreciated. Keep writing :-)