The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute, and I've heard that expression many times!!:)
That was great! I hope I'm that cool of a Mom when my kids get big enough to drop cars in holes.
This was fun. I love the companionship the story made real- and I loved the familial bond that had Dad come by at the exact moment of need. You had me peering over into the hole to check out possible dangers. Well done.
I understand this story as I was probably the one without a lick of sense.

Maybe it's when you have boys. Good story
I really "liked the feel" of this story, "talking heads" phrase is great!
Ahhh I love Marilyn! What a hero even if she did get herself in a bit of predicament.