The Official Writing Challenge
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Since I am not an avid follower of poetry...found myself a little confused, but was deeply touched at the tribute to your mother!

I consider my poetry IQ at about a 20 out of 100, if that helps :)
01/31/10
Abigail is one of my favourite bible characters. Thanks for the interesting look into her world.
02/01/10
You had me at your first sentence, with the marvelous phrase 'rigid guarantee'. Excellent.

My only suggestion would be a more compelling title that matches the excellent writing of the story.

Very well done!
You told the story from a fresh point of view. Good job.
02/02/10
Very nice. I really enjoyed this piece. I didn't expect a Bible character's story from this title.
02/02/10
I really liked the story. Well told.