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Very pleasant baptismal account...I enjoyed reading this.
This was an enjoyable account of a baptism. I think this could be an excerpt out of a longer story on what exactly led to this day and the decision to be baptized.
You made this account, of a baptismal service in the Red River sound so romantic - Excellent. Being from the UK I was wondering if this is the same Red River as in the song "Please come back to the Red River Valley." Thanks -
What a joyous wonderful description of baptism. I've heard of breaking ice on ponds to baptize and never a tale of anyone getting sick from it. We serve a God who really cares.Bless you, Ruth
Well written and enjoyable.
I always tear up at baptisms, even when I read about them. Thank you for sharing.
Excellent work and voice for the MC! I hope this does well!
This line sums up for me the message of this well-written baptismal account "I consciously put away memories of how many times these plans have been derailed, interrupted, lost…this is the day! I am rejoicing in my heart, despite the fact it is late in September, despite the cold, despite the concerns, despite everything."