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I enjoyed this story very much - I know well that a little kindness to someone in the throes of despair can truly save their life. Just a suggestion:I think pointing out something to the reader diminishes the power of the story, and this is a great story indeed, it clipped along keeping me wanting to read...
10/09/09
I enjoyed the setting of this piece...could readily imagine it all.
10/09/09
Nice read.But I have to agree that the break in the story to point something out interrupts the flow of the story.
10/13/09
You have a great story. It reminds us of how important we can be in another person's life.
10/16/09
Dan, I enjoyed this story very much. It's message is one all of us should take to heart, and learn to be sensitive to God's promptings when it comes to reaching out to people in need. Thanks for sharing.