The Official Writing Challenge
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08/15/05
I had difficulty with voice in this poem, and I know that was the poetic intent, I liked this, and with a bit of symbolic effort this could be great.
08/15/05
I especially liked the switch in your last stanza.
08/17/05
A very interesting poem.
08/19/05
I love this - especially the first two stanzas. I'm looking forward to finding out who wrote it.