The Official Writing Challenge
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08/22/09

You must be a quilter! You begin the article with "fall colors turning brown" and in increments fully illustrated, you end with "Holding your Bible close to your heart and wrapped in your homemade quilt, your heart was once again touched by reading the word of God while snuggled in your homemade quilt."

It's a bit redundant but that's ok. One step at a time, just like making a quilt, right?! A nice read. Note needed editing on sentence structure. Good on details too.



08/25/09
What a comfy cozy picture!
08/27/09
You paint a lovely picture of a warm and intimate time with our best Friend.
08/27/09
I did not write this time...because I (hate) winter, but you have reminded me that winter is indeed a perfect time to grab a homemade quilt (or comforter) and get snuggly with the Word of God. Thank you for the devotional quality of your entry.