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07/23/09
This almost made me cry. I actually felt happy with the birthday girl I like this sotry a lot!
07/25/09
A lovely story, enjoyed the dialogue.
07/27/09
Oh nice! I like the title and the idea about labels. This child is still in the childhood phase and not yet a terrible teen. Her excitement and enthusiasm at the birthday illustrates this well and the extra presnet that was a lovely surprise for the reader as well.
Good to have a touching one in the midst of all the teenage angst!!
07/29/09
Nicely written story of the priorities in life. Yes, children are a reward from the Lord, Teens and Infants!
07/29/09
This family is The Cleavers? Just kidding. This would be the family any young girl would be proud to be a part of. Mom and daughter walking arm in arm downstairs. Making the bed. I want this family!!
Good writing.
Mona