The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
This is beautifully written - a tribute to a man full of life yet confused at times. I am glad we are not God. I love our God of grace and mercy.
05/31/09
Very powerful imagery. This tugged at me.
06/05/09
Wow, Marita! That first stanza is so gripping and tragic! What a sad story all the way through! I hate it when darkness wins! I know these mental/emotional torments harass many of those who have gone off to serve our country. What an awful "reward" for their selfless service! Thank you for reminding us of the horrors of war in this well-written piece!