The Official Writing Challenge
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I wish my witnessing brought such compliance! This autistic child certainly is functioning on a higher level! But I believe that the ones who don't, in their innocence, will meet Jesus too. Like the title too.
04/10/09
I have a soft spot for disabled children, so this really touched me.

Watch out for too-frequent use of cliches, and you switched POV for a paragraph (the one where the boy is swinging, and we jump from your MC's head to his head for a bit).

Sweet story, promising writing!
04/13/09
This is a well-thoughtout story. There is something to be admired in "the faith of a child." I enjoyed reading your story.
Isn't it strange how "disabled" people often teach "normal" people the most important lessons?

This is nicely done.
04/14/09
Your title caught my eye, and I especially liked the paragraph about Adam on the swing, practicing to meet Jesus someday! Nice story! :)
Very sweet and tender story. Glad the MC began to see a need for change in her heart and life.