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Splitting into paragraphs might have made it easier to read, but I'm a newbie, so what do I know?
Iris Whitney
In addition to paragraphing, a few edits for spelling and grammar will make this easier to read. You'll get the hang of it!
I'm so happy to read that your husband is coming home--how blessed you are!
Keep writing and learning. You are off to a great start, and you have received some very helpful comments from others to guide you.
Keep a lookout for grammar errors. It is so easy not to notice them until its too late.