The Official Writing Challenge
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07/26/05
Amen! what a trip. Good, humourous adventure. God bless ya, littlelight
07/27/05
Very fun to read. I love stories in rhyme, and Jonah is one of my favorites!

Permitwriter
07/28/05
Very fun read! For some reason I had to read it to the tune of 'The Beverly Hillbillies' theme song :)
VERY cute. I love the rhyme and rhythym.
Excellent work! I love it!
07/28/05
Too much fun! I guess that was as close to a car trip as you could get back then. LOL.
Very clever. Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
07/28/05
Hooray! This is great! Very good rhythm throughout, funny, and a good message.
Fantastic! I read this out loud to my family and it reads well and so much fun.
07/30/05
I kept hearing "Jonah was a prophet, but he never really got it" (credit to Veggie Tales :)

Loved it!
Enjoyed this! So clearly tells the story and shows Jonah's emotions. Interesting interpretation of the topic.
Cute; liked the sing-song rhythm. A fun poem with a strong message!
08/03/05
I really enjoyed reading this. A fun yet look at Job's trials. I can see you've really worked hard on this, getting the ideas, right words and punctuation. Well done.