The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/08
I wonder if this is fiction or autobiography? It has the ring of authenticity about it, and I enjoyed reading it. Well done.
11/11/08
Lovely story! I like all the small elements that make it personal. You might review the formatting in Level 4 pieces to see how to lay out your piece. That would help it to read better. Nice work!
What a sweet story! I loved how the kids remembered to honor Jesus with their light display. Nicely done. Keep writing!
This is a very beautiful story, I would have been proud of them also.. Thanks for commenting on my article.