The Official Writing Challenge
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Good reminder of where we are to focus and see indeed how we are blessed by those who also push our buttons.
09/11/08
Fun play on the words. Very descriptive. And what a good reminder of God's word on watching our tongue!
09/12/08
SMILE... I love your title! The ending was great, too. It really does help to count your blessings when we're ready to POP.
09/12/08
Good beginning and ending, but I found the middle a bit too much like a quick sermon.

I get the message though, and that's what's important.

May God bless and keep you writing!

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Loved the title. You have done a very good job with this entry, showing how often we "snap" when we shouldn't even be crackling.

Good devotional here. Well done!
This is fun. I think all moms with young children can relate. Every mom should read the verses you mentioned each and every morning. Well Done :-)
Very nice devotional. I love the line: “winding her up and watching her spin.” With four kids (two are boys), I can totally relate to all you said here. Loved it.

Just a thought: I would have liked more showing and less telling. SHOW me a scene where your son climbs on the fridge and your other son is asking a million questions. Put me in the scene. OR put me at a breakfast where your husband "winds you up!" That would be such fun.

Again, good job and great word choices.
09/16/08
Cute devotional! I think you could definitely write more....add a story or two....you do have 750 words to expand to! Good job.
09/17/08
Very nice devotional. I agree with others that I would have liked to have a bit more in terms of dialoge or scenes to illustrate your great points. I love "winding her up and watching her spin"!
Very enjoyable read on topic and great advise.
I like this. A very good read. Good job.
Good little devotional. My only complaint is that I wanted more! Feel free to use your full 750 word count.

You told so much truth in this, and I appreciate you sharing it with us all.

I don't know if you are new to the challenge, but I look forward to seeing more entries from you in the future. :)