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08/29/08
Good Biblical study on patience. Well done.
09/02/08
Excellent work. This is grammatically sound, easy to follow, and teaches a Holy lesson.

I think you made a good point about how impatience, in the long run, can cost us dearly.

Once again, excellent entry!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship
09/03/08
It's too bad you have a 750 word limit because I'm sure you can write much more about the subject. Nice job touching on key points and specific references. I totally felt like I was reading a devotional, which I think was your point. Good job!
Great job on this topic and I can appreciate the time and thought that went into it. Wonderful devotional.
If someone wants a good example of how to write a powerful devotional, then they need to take a look at this piece. You did a great job of clearly conveying your message and accurately using scriptures to backup your points. This is the kind of article that goes great with breakfast in the morning before work. Great thoughts to start off the day. :)