The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/08
Lovely images. I enjoyed this very much. Great use of repetition, too.
09/01/08
Very good!

A time to read something good
like this.

Thanks for sharing such a great poem.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Good job with this poem - I especially enjoyed "a time for serenity/in the midst of the buzz".
You might want to add capitalization and punctuation to make this poem flow better.
The repetition was well used, it added to the poem without being too much.
Keep up the good work!