The Official Writing Challenge
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You showed well the feelings of your mc. I'd like to see how she "fixed" the situation.
08/22/08
LOVE the open ending!
08/27/08
Hmmm? Yes, what should she do? I like that you make the reader come to the conclusion. Nice job with the topic.
Oooo, I've known people like that who pretended everything was hunky dory when they'd hurt me badly (only they never appologized like this character did). Loved how both characters learned from their mistakes and may be able to forgive and start again. Unlike Jan, I would have loved just a little more of the story. Hehe. Great job!