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Good lesson with an effective analogy. Thanks for the thoughts to ponder. Much truth here.
I enjoyed this story. I am familiar with the Pilgrim's Progress story, having read it years ago, and recently, by going to the ChristiansUnite site and re reading it there. Your story made good use of the analogy, and yet you modernized it nicely...You certainly don't belong in the Beginners, in my estimation...But I know that doesn't count...Hope you can move up the ladder. Great work!...Helen
I too, thought your updated analogy was excellent. Hope you share this with others as a devotional.
An enjoyable story with a good message.
I liked all the characters coming together from these other tales. Good message.
Good story, I enjoyed the lesson taught here.
An allegory! One of my favorite stories is Pilgrim's Progress. The names Edmund and Lucy are very familiar, from another allegory, right?
Thank you for writing this.
I enjoy allegories such as this. Very well written, and the point you were trying to make was clear. I kept thinking that these were the kids from The Chronicles of Narnia series. Well all but Christian. I don't know if that was intentional or coincidental, but regardless, this was an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing.
AUTHOR'S ACKNOWLEDGMENT: This article makes use of ideas, characters, and events from various books, including the Holy Bible (NASB & NLT), Pilgrim's Progress (by John Bunyan), and Chronicles of Narnia (by C S Lewis) to create a story that conveys a message regarding Christian walk.