The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Hmmm, lots of POV changes and glimpses here, I see it playing out like a movie, but I don't quite connect with Kyle because he just seems so ungrateful...I liked Sara though and the quote at the end, that was good! ^_^
07/21/08
Great prodigal story here. I'd love to see the homecoming. :)
Good character development, which I think would be even better without the 750 word limit - not much room left for action development. :) Nice job.
I liked this take on the prodigal son story. Thank you for sharing this! Keep on writing.
08/04/08
Hi Norms, I really enjoyed this one. Well written. Love Ken.