The Official Writing Challenge
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05/31/08
IT's great to have special cousin. There's a lot of information in this story. It may be better to focus on one incident that showed Derek's character the most.
Well done. Keep writing.
Your cousin sounds like a strong man being able to endure so much. I'm glad that you are close to him and that you shared your story with all of us. It was an enjoyable read. :)
Your gratitude and devotion are strongly expressed in this personal narrative. Nice job. :)